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12.03.2012 (434 days ago )
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Poems By: Rice Barber

Open your mind,

and allow the thoughts to bleed,

up from the cerebelum,

planting a mental seed.

 

The things that can happen,

are one to reckon with,

but not to be mistaken,

for a neurological experiment.

 

Beyond the eye lids,

lies a world to explore,

so open your eyes wide,

and strive to learn more.

 

never give in to the idea,

that the sky is the limit,

for the sky is just the horizon,

leading to something much more exquisite.

 

The human mind,

can only pereive what the eyes see,

and oh, what my eyes have not seen,

does this not exite you?

 

Explore further than the end,

and you will find where you begin,

is just a repeat of yesterday,

in each and every way.

 

please do not allow yourself to die,

without truly living,

for so many have passed through,

having barely even felt the breeze.

 

Open minds,

lead to open possibilities,

and closed minds,

lead to closed chapters...

 

the moral of this story is,

there is no moral at all,

for the path to happines in life,

already exists within us all.

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  •  PaulaB437 wrote 434 days ago (neutral) 
     
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    I enjoyed this poem. I believe the word "one" should be plural in the second stanza.
     
       
     
     
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  •  PoetBoi wrote 434 days ago (positive) 
     
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    Sweet. Yung 1, you got a lot of talent, bro.
     
       
     
     
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  •  marcelareribeiro wrote 434 days ago (positive) 
     
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    There is no moral at all... I loved it! Brazilian Kisses :)
     
       
     
     
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  •  Anonymous wrote 434 days ago (neutral) 
     
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    Nice! My head is bleeding though! Too many thoughts.
     
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