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14.03.2012 (435 days ago )
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The Orchid and the Bee
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The Orchid and the Bee

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How does the Bee Orchid know the Queen bee

to mimic her in looks and her scents to the breezes

The bee attracted is not disappointed but finds

is rewarded with nectar and pollen combined.

Without eyes to see, nose to smell, indeed mind to conceive,

How did the flower know the bee?

And I think to myself…

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The Universal body of infinite intelligence above and beyond language and thought is demonstrated in a flower.

 

 

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  •  Anonymous wrote 434 days ago (positive) 
     
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    Indeed, beautiful, but the font you chose to utilize dresses the princess in jesters clothing. It looks a mess. I understand whimsical and simply drawing on a moment of thought, but it loses effect with Comic Sans characters. The form and structure are all over the place. Especially, when compared to your prior offerings. A quick edit can cure these issues, but you did not care, which is evident in your other poems. You have set a high standard for yourself. Maintain it and go higher.
     
       
     
     
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  •  FrankWhite wrote 435 days ago (neutral) 
     
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    Man, you are good. Your poems were the first I read on this website and you are just on another level. You have emotion and thought down to an art form.
     
       
     
     
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  •  PaulaB437 wrote 435 days ago (neutral) 
     
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    Perfection is always exciting. I enjoyed this poem.

     
       
     
     
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  •  HunterBrothers wrote 435 days ago (positive) 
     
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    Really sweet. I really like your poem and Poetry.
     
       
     
     
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  •  Sami wrote 435 days ago (neutral) 
     
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    I love this poem. Very gentle and thoughtful.
     
       
     
     
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