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Poems By: LeRoi_Poet26

I look out my window, out at the rain,
As stains accumulate, on my window pane,
I hear the pit-patter, as raindrops splatter,
Over chimneys and roofs,
clouds grow blacker,
*sigh* I remember whe
n I was young,
When summer actually meant...
Enjoying the sun... Frown

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  •  LeRoi_Poet26 wrote 451 days ago (neutral) 
     
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    @HL_Hunter No problem, I try to make a connection with the reader, hoping they can relate to an emotion I had.

    @Epabaxter Thank-you for your comment, the words I use are important to me, to make sure I capture an image to the best of my ability in poem form.

    @PaulaB437 Thank-you, happy it had that effect, the mind and imagination is a beautiful thing.

    Thank you all, for taking time to read my poem. :)
     
       
     
     
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  •  PaulaB437 wrote 451 days ago (neutral) 
     
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    As stains accumulate on my window pain is a great line. It provides me with imagery.
     
       
     
     
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  •  epabaxter wrote 451 days ago (neutral) 
     
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    Love the wordplay... enjoyable to the end... the little that was said, said a lot. Very fun spirited.
     
       
     
     
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  •  HL_Hunter wrote 451 days ago (positive) 
     
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    This poem reminds me of youthful summers looking outside at the rain, wishing for the sun to shine so that I could go outside and play. Thanks for the journey into my past! Keep it coming!
     
       
     
     
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  •  LeRoi_Poet26 wrote 452 days ago (neutral) 
     
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    Thank-you, over here, feels like summer is shortening and winter is lasting forever! You hit the nail on the head "If only spring can get here..." thats the first step!
     
       
     
     
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