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06.04.2012 (412 days ago )
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take a look at the world
Poems By: neil sparkes
take a look
at the world
from the
seat of a plane
through the
blanket of cloud
across cities
and plains
cherry blossom
perfume in kyoto
"jai des visions
de vagues
et de
fruits tropicaux"
written in lipstick
on your bedroom wall
running from time
and you call it progress
let me
be in love
when there's
nothing to do
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MindBodySoul wrote 410 days ago (positive) 1"running from time and you call it progress" there's just not enough time for loving0 points
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JamesHunter wrote 411 days ago (positive) 1I love the patience in your writing, there's no doubt you know the direction you want to go, and you captured the emotions of a traveler longing for their beloved very well here. I thought the lipstick writing should have been on the mirror, though; lipstick writing on the wall made me think of "Who's gonna clean that wall, later.". lol0 points -
neilsparkes wrote 412 days ago (neutral) 0From the album "Globalhead" by Temple of Sound (Neil Sparkes & Count Dubulah).
Vocals by Neil Sparkes & Hukwe Zawose
Label:Koch Records
Catalog#:KOC-CD-5553
http://soundcloud.com/neil-sparkes/ take-a-look-at-the-world0 points
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